2015년 11월 28일 토요일

Opinion Paragraph

Do you like to smoke at public spaces?
 

 Involuntary smoking(간접흡연) is the government's must-solved problem. I think government should regulate smoking at public spaces, because non-smokers have a right to breathe in clean air. Also, Smoke from cigarettes is harmful to people who breathe it in indirectly. According to doopedia, person who doesn't smoke, but has smoking spouse has a higher probability to lung cancer and heart disease more than their spouse. Economic loss caused by smoking is also great problem to society. In Korea, according to study investigated by Institute of Population & Health Service Research at Yonsei University in 1995, expenses to medical treatment would be 2 trillion won, and expenses which are used to solve environmental pollution made by smoke from cigarettes would be 3 trillion won. Now the expenses will cost more, because 20 years passed. To sum up, government should regulate smoking at public spaces for public welfare.



Involuntary Smoking, Photo, E. (n.d.).Chosunmedia. Retrieved December 4, 2015.


#Credit for reason no.1

간접흡연. (n.d.). Retrieved December 4, 2015,
from http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=1222656&cid=40942&categoryId=32749

#Credit for reason no.2

흡연으로 인한 질병과 환경피해. (2010, November 26).
 Retrieved December 4, 2015, from http://www.happycampus.com/doc/11098245



2015년 11월 13일 금요일

Blog Post #5

 
Learning from Blog Post
 
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Kim Yeeun
 
 
Through blog posting, I've learned that writing is a diffucult one. For writing, I have to know about grammar, citation, and so on. It was very difficult and hard for me to know and apply all those things in writing. It is still difficult to write a paragraph precisely, but at least, I know about grammar or citation rules. This means that I have more opportunities and availabilities to be a good writer, and I satisfy with this. I've learned not only academic writing rules,but also confidence in writing.