Learning from Comments

 

     Through blog posting, I learned two things. First, the comments from others taught me that I sometimes forgot to use verb. Whenever I write my first draft, I examine my writing at least twice, but many students who read my paragraph notice me about verb. Thanks to those comments, I check out my paragraph -especially verb- more than twice. Second, from the comments that I have posted on to others, I learned that many students start a sentence with "FAN BOYS". I was one of them, and many students are still have some mistakes with it. Gary said, "Do not start a sentence with FAN BOYS",so we have to keep it on our mind.

Blog Post #3

Full Of Happiness, Everland!

Everland gives happiness to people who visit there with three main points. First, Everland is easy and inexpensive to access. From Seoul and Gyeonggi-do, many buses and subways are running which are clean and comfortable. There are many buses going to Everland directly, and the subway is easy to transfer at Giheung Station. Their fare is also reasonable -the maximum fare of bus and subway is about 3,000 won-, so most people who want to use public transportation are satisfied with the fare. Second, the Everland is furnished with clean amenities and great services. If you go to the Everland, you can see the roads, toilets, and other facilities are clean. The cleanliness gives us a feeling such as respectations. Great services are observed from every staff in Everland. All staffs in Everland are kind and always smiling. You can see that kindness from every ride facilities' staffs who greet us in front of an attraction. At last, Everland has many kinds of entertainments. Everland is famous with many ride facilities which is about 30. Everland also changes its theme every season, and it makes people want to visit again. According to the Hangukgyeongje article, Everland got first prize from general satisfactions such as fare, convenience, and services for 21 years, and the customers said that they want to visit again. Changeing themes, for example, in spring Everland shows off its Rose Garden, and in fall they make a Halloween Party. Everland has lots of restaurants, snack bars, and so on..., so people can enjoy some snacks whenever they want to. Memorial shop is also famous in Everland. It gives people pleasure memories with stuffs that carved with symbols of Everland. In conclusion, these three main points are factors that people receive happiness from Everland.

 

 

 

 

     Untitled Image, Photo, E. (n.d.). EVERLAND RESORT. Retrieved October 9, 2015.

 

 

 

 

김예은.(2015).View of Everland Garden [This photo was taken by me.]
 Retrieved from my computer on October 9, 2015.

Article reference

 지은, 정. (2015, October 13). [2015 산업별 고객 만족도(KCSI)]. 한국경제, p. 1. Retrieved October 16, 2015, from http://www.hankyung.com/news/app/newsview.php?aid=2015101207411