Full Of Happiness, Everland!
Everland gives happiness to people who visit there with three main points. First, Everland is easy and inexpensive to access. From Seoul and Gyeonggi-do, many buses and subways are running which are clean and comfortable. There are many buses going to Everland directly, and the subway is easy to transfer at Giheung Station. Their fare is also reasonable -the maximum fare of bus and subway is about 3,000 won-, so most people who want to use public transportation are satisfied with the fare. Second, the Everland is furnished with clean amenities and great services. If you go to the Everland, you can see the roads, toilets, and other facilities are clean. The cleanliness gives us a feeling such as respectations. Great services are observed from every staff in Everland. All staffs in Everland are kind and always smiling. You can see that kindness from every ride facilities' staffs who greet us in front of an attraction. At last, Everland has many kinds of entertainments. Everland is famous with many ride facilities which is about 30. Everland also changes its theme every season, and it makes people want to visit again. According to the Hangukgyeongje article, Everland got first prize from general satisfactions such as fare, convenience, and services for 21 years, and the customers said that they want to visit again. Changeing themes, for example, in spring Everland shows off its Rose Garden, and in fall they make a Halloween Party. Everland has lots of restaurants, snack bars, and so on..., so people can enjoy some snacks whenever they want to. Memorial shop is also famous in Everland. It gives people pleasure memories with stuffs that carved with symbols of Everland. In conclusion, these three main points are factors that people receive happiness from Everland.
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Retrieved from my computer on October 9, 2015.
Article reference
지은, 정. (2015, October 13). [2015 산업별 고객 만족도(KCSI)]. 한국경제, p. 1. Retrieved October 16, 2015, from http://www.hankyung.com/news/app/newsview.php?aid=2015101207411
Hi Yeeun,
답글삭제Your topic is so interested, because I like Everland! I read your paragraph, and I empathize with it. Regretfully, in my opinion, you didn’t write your paragraph’s title and concluding sentences. It is better to write title and concluding sentences.
Have a nice day,
Jun-young
Dear Yeeun,
답글삭제After I read your story, I wanted to go to Everland. Everland seems to be a place that gives people excitement and fun since there are lots of amusement rides and delicious food. Also, the parade is exciting to watch and the thriling safari ride is popular among all the people who visit Everland . However, there are some bad things about Everland. It is more expensive than lotte world, has no ticket discounts and also it is difficult to go. if these bad things are improved, i think that everland will be the best place to visit!
Sincerely,
Ji Young Kim
Hello Yeeun,
답글삭제I only see the word ‘Everland’, it makes me happy. We can easily go to Everland by public transportation. I want to go to Everland on Halloween day. Because the performance of Everland is wonderful. The friendly staffs also make people happy. I feel empathy with your paragraph. It reminded me of memories in Everland.
Thank you,
Anna
Hello Yeeun,
답글삭제Everland always makes people enjoy and happy. Actually, I went to Everland only once because of student travel in 12 years old. But I have happy and vivid memories as riding interesting facilities with my friends at there! Your story makes me remember my precious memories :-)
Thanks,
Sojeong