Learning from Comments
Through blog posting, I learned two things. First, the comments from others taught me that I sometimes forgot to use verb. Whenever I write my first draft, I examine my writing at least twice, but many students who read my paragraph notice me about verb. Thanks to those comments, I check out my paragraph -especially verb- more than twice. Second, from the comments that I have posted on to others, I learned that many students start a sentence with "FAN BOYS". I was one of them, and many students are still have some mistakes with it. Gary said, "Do not start a sentence with FAN BOYS",so we have to keep it on our mind.
Hi Yeeun,
답글삭제First of all, thank you for your comment on my blog! After I read your comment, I realized that I made a mistake. Thanks a lot. As you said above, I'm also a person who review my writing at least twice when I'm writing my first draft because I'm not a perfect writer, and there could be some mistakes. I always tried not to make mistakes, but there was always at least one mistake, and other students came and corrected for me. I hope that we both can improve our writing skills a lot at the end of this term.
Sincerely,
Doyeon